4 BAR Challenge!!!

Ok Here is your chance. Write your best 4 bars

...i wrote it to "the dungeon" by lil twist...


flow like a matress they jus sleepin on me
instrumental killer i think the grim reaper want me
but i aint trippin tho, kuz i got my ppl on me
o city we up next & we aint creepin homie

rap to a beat? nah im rappin ova it
flow jus like a remote & im controllin shit
turn hiphop to me so i roll wit it
& the buzz im finna recieve is gon sho for it

on the beat til it oser up,better yet it colder up
kuz i spit that ice i jus make the track froze as fuck
yea i look so young but my mind is old as a
michael myers film thats like 20 years im old enough

more rhymes than dr.suess, mo hoes than garden tools
ima lil nigga but i dnt mess wit baby stools
i dnt care about the law, f the rules
ima kill every beat im on wit gratitude


FLASH23

Ya'll Niggaz Hate Me I don't give a Fuck
Soon Im a Star And You Can Suck My Nuts
Im a Young Artist I Start A New Era
It's Rainnin Money I need an Umbrella
Lyrical Talent Shout The Fuck Up When I Spittin
I chase you also If I Must The Door Kick In
This Is The End Here You got The 4 Bars
Im on Other Level Call Me a Lil Star



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YoungFlash wrote:...i wrote it to "the dungeon" by lil twist...


flow like a matress they jus sleepin on me
instrumental killer i think the grim reaper want me
but i aint trippin tho, kuz i got my ppl on me
o city we up next & we aint creepin homie

rap to a beat? nah im rappin ova it
flow jus like a remote & im controllin shit
turn hiphop to me so i roll wit it
& the buzz im finna recieve is gon sho for it

on the beat til it oser up,better yet it colder up
kuz i spit that ice i jus make the track froze as fuck
yea i look so young but my mind is old as a
michael myers film thats like 20 years im old enough

more rhymes than dr.suess, mo hoes than garden tools
ima lil nigga but i dnt mess wit baby stools
i dnt care about the law, f the rules
ima kill every beat im on wit gratitude


FLASH23

That's 8 Bars But Lyrical Guud !!!!!

dont bite mah shyt (tidbit "iysoh" is pronounced lyke iso)

dont spitt ABC rap nott ah kid immah grown man
yall still trynah fynd yur way pilgrimage im at tha holy land
eatin through these sheets everyday niggah i stay hungry fam
hunger never goes away rap game mah concentration camp
yea niggah i stay concentrated i do me
pretty boy gott mad game niccname me EB
niggah im shinin on yu dudes in comparison yu lacc luster
iysoh is tha truth cant even disprove that shyt on myth buster

I love the way she grinding like a pro skater
My middle finger's up to all the haters
I'm breaking down all the doors
Pimp hand strong for all these whores
Ya'll need to get lives like a 1-up mushroom
Can't smoke what I smoke it'll lead you to your doom
Did these bars leave you in awe
I tore through this like a chain saw

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Copedina avalanche mixed wit a hurricane/
Busin shots at hatabataz steady jockin mane/
put a hollow thru yah brain,call it hood rogaine/
liquid like gas but i burn like propaine/
dey begging fo da lobsta so i showem how da sushi flip/
white O's tryna make all of my cookies crisp/
trampaline yah face if u really wanta act hard/
snap yah neck and jump rope wit yah spinal cord.

im a dominater blow your face off see you later/say hi to all my haters got your guts lookin like aligaters/you a chump and im just playin the leader got your soul pitch black like dark vader/im so major that i so be your horra chaser step back or you will get taserd/you to old for the game like the dukes of haserd/smash down apon you basterds because they know im a master/make your spirit lift up out your chest like casper/turn your world into a desaster and when you see the hunters your body will get capcherd/so you are nothing but slackers crunch you up like salted crackers/i see a lot of swager jackers but they cant match my maker/get tombstone by the undertaker

Your girl want me to take her out like a pitcher/ cause champagne is over flowing out my pitcher/ I scratch these lottery tickets like a professional itchier / they just want pictures but some want a movie flick breh / call me an acrobat becuase the money i be flipping/ 5-0 come no chips im dippin/ if they want to shoot then i guess pippin/ Forever big chips im gettin/ they just hate cause gifted/ boys take let them hate they trippin/ aint no joke no fiction


Just Printing Stacks and Racks of that Eddie Bower Money.